The 8 Components Of An Effective LinkedIn Outreach Message

I have been using InMail as an outreach method on LinkedIn for years. I am good at it – I usually get a response rate ranging from sixty to sixty-five percent, depending on what I am trying to accomplish with a given program. 

Most people are not good at InMail: they take a couple swipes at it, get lousy – or no – responses, and give up. 

This week, I thought I would cover the eight basics I use for any InMail. These eight ideas are also transferable and usable in your emails. This is not an in depth InMail how-to. When I teach how to put InMails together to a client or a company, it usually takes three Zoom sessions, with lots of practice in between. Some people are put off by that idea, but I make no apologies. A sixty percent response rate takes work. 

If there is one overriding principle behind my InMail teachings it is that you write a specific personalized message for each specific individual you are sending a message. When you send a generic message to twenty individuals you will get a generic response rate, that is, a low one. When you send twenty individualized messages to twenty individuals you will get a very good response rate. Most people are used to getting crappy messages, so that when we send a good one it really stands out.  

Component #1: Send your message to people who will see it

Sounds silly doesn’t it? But this is the biggest single problem I see with using LinkedIn for outreach. As maybe 80% of LinkedIn users use LinkedIn less than once every couple weeks, 80% of your messages are going to people who either won’t see them, or yours is just one more message that has piled up since the last time they used LinkedIn.

If you have a 3% response rate now, paying attention to this idea alone can quintuple your response rate. 

Component #2: A great subject or title line

The role of the subject line is to make your recipient want to read the message. That’s it. 

Component #3: A hyper personalized message

What personalization is not: “Hi <insert first name>, I see you are the <their job title> at <their company.>  Hyper personalization means writing something that shows you have done their research; it means mentioning something that is completely idiosyncratic to them. This involves research, but it is worth it because you want to show the recipient that this message has been written specifically for him or her.

Component #4: Establish your credibility

There are several ways you can do this. The best way to do this is to allude to the specific, tangible results you got for someone or some company that the recipient knows. 

Component #5: Provide the reason you are reaching out to them

Many salespeople are taught that they should hide the “real” reason they are contacting someone. If you do a good job with these InMail components, the recipient will understand why you are reaching out to them and they will be willing to respond. 

Component #6: Focus on their potential results

Always, always, always talk in terms of their results. And there are effective ways of doing this that they will accept and be interested in. There are effective ways of doing this and setting them up so that the only question they have is, “How do they do that?” 

Component #7: Have a call to action that is realistic

Too many people over reach. They ask for a sales call or to set up a demo or a trial in the first message. That’s ridiculous. 

Component #8: Make it short. 

You should aim for 100 words. 80 would be ideal. That’s the real art in an outreach message, whether it is via InMail or Email. Can you accomplish everything I have listed above in eighty or a hundred words? Yes, it absolutely can be done.

If you went back over the last few outreach messages you sent, how many of these eight would be present?